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Dear Mello,
I know you aren't one to be paitent, so I'll just get things out of the way. I want you to come back. Come back home to me, and our apartment.
I miss you. Sure at times I called you a bitch, but you were my bitch. And bitch, you were perfect for me and our lifestyle. I still have some chocolate in the fridge for you if you want some.
I'll help you catch Kira. Maybe this time I can come before him. I will do anything to help you catch him, as long as it puts you back in my arms, and makes you happy.
You know I've never been one with words. This took me about two hours. Just so you know that I'm writing this clean and it's not the drugs talking to you, here are the rest of my cigs.
I'll be seeing you soon Mels, or so I hope.

I love you. Come back home.
PS: My real name is Mail Jeevas.
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"UGH! He'd never come back to that either!" Matt screamed at the paper. Salty, bitter tears welled in his eyes and dropped silently onto the short, but sweet, letter. He then crumpled it up into a ball and threw it on the floor. There, it joined five other letters. All of them probably never to be sent.
Maybe I'll continue this, maybe not.



Just a quick someting I threw together. It wrote itself really. My inspiration was some of :iconcaliforniablondexoxo: work. She is really amazing with MxM stories, i suggest that anyone checks her out.
COMMENTS PLEASE!
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student Writer
>..< that was so sweet! You should continue it!! Or I shall come after you with an ax and pitchfork like my editor does to me! xDD and thanx so much for the compliment :love: :tighthug:
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Deathnotefinatic13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha I do<3
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Writer
You do come after me with an ax and pitchfork? Hellz yeah you do xD
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Deathnotefinatic13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehe
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Writer
and you don't even feel guilty for it -huffs- xD
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Deathnotefinatic13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDx
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Writer
aww lol don't give me that face -cuddles-
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Deathnotefinatic13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-cuddles back- ok momma
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I'd pay to see that! But I'll continue it. *hopefully* ;)
Girl PA-LEASE! We all have to stick together to make the world feel loved. That and I just really like your writing style and stories. XD
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Writer
Haha xDD got that right! lol but thanx for liek the 50th time xD but wooow I think your the only person I know that says please like that, prep much ;p jk haha and its not that funny...she can be so cruel >.< and you better!!
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
UH! No way in hell am I a prep! That just so happened to come to mind. :p And I completed Chpt. 2 with the help of my friend. It's an... Emo moment for Matt.
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And are you un-grounded yet?
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Writer
xDD I know i'm just messin with you haha and congrats xD I have SIL done, I'm just trying to run it by my editor who is being slow >.< but no, I wont be ungrounded for like another 3 weeks -sigh-
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Deathnotefinatic13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
meanie I said I was sorry!
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Writer
xD its ok lol u got it done and thats all that matters :p
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Deathnotefinatic13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mhmm
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NO WAY! Grrr... I wants your to send me a preview? PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY!
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CaliforniaBlondeXOXO Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Writer
xDD do you have a yahoo messenger? if so I'll send you the unedited version :)
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My mom monitors my yahoo now because I got hacked once. :( So that's out. Can you copy and paste it in the note box and send me it? Pretty please? And sorry for being a pain in the butt with the whole Yahoo thing. ;(
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dotti55 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
I have a question. You state that maybe you will continue it, maybe you won't. Do you think it's fair to share something like this, getting readers involved...and then NOT continue? Wouldn't it be better to not share it unless you were sure you were going to continue it? I think what you've written is excellent, but if you're not going to continue it, why should I bother commenting or getting involved with it? Which would be a shame because it really has such wonderful potential, I would love to see you do more with it; there are so many questions I would love to see answered.

Anyway, just a question. As a writer myself, I can't imagine not continuing anything I've posted, and yet I have seen this kind of thing quite often but never had the chance to ask the question.
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hm... Good point. I when I wrote it I figured that this would just be a oneshot. But then I got a request to continue, and I'm still on the fence about it. You've really made me rethink why I didn't want to. Your comment might just be what motivated me to continue something.
I'm so glad you liked it though. I really appreciate how you got your question across, without blasting me with a flame thrower. Some people really have those issues. -.-"
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dotti55 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
Oh I understand that, believe me. I know a lot of people start things and their world shifts and they can't continue. I hope you do continue, there's a major lack of good, intelligent writing here on DA that doesn't involve rape, incest and horrific sadness so reading yours was sooooo refreshing!!

Hugs!!
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel like every fanfiction I ever read anymore is either some rape or sex story. There is no escape sometimes.
Hugs in agreement.
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dotti55 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
I don't mind the sex as long as it's loving and romantic; I just hate the violence. Thanks for the hugs!!
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ValtenceMarie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this is good, but could have been drawn out a bit more to add more depth and emotion. After all it's Matt's last ditch effort to get Mello back, correct?

The letter seems so bittersweet,and i find that rather cute.
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh, I was thinking about making a series of letters that Matt considers sending, but never does. I can picture Matt scribbling different things down on a piece of paper, then balling it up and throwing it at the ground.
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ValtenceMarie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I can picture that too. Like no matter what he writes down it will never be good enough for his Mello, or something.
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just added a bit to the bottom so that it would make a bit more sense, and be easier to get that point across. :) thanks for the advice though. It really helped to hear something other than all frills. :)
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ValtenceMarie Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome, and the bit added at the bottom did help out.:)
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AYF100 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
This was sweet<3
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AnimeCraze99 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thanks!
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AYF100 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Welcome~
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